I'm glad you enjoyed the story in spite of its distracting grammatical flaws. I thank you for your comments and will earnestly consider them in my efforts to become a better writer. I will also make a commitment to avoid bad-influence authors like William Faulkner, who could stretch one paragraph over two pages with hardly a stroke of punctuation, and Cormac McCarthy, who doesn't even believe in apostrophes or putting his dialogue in quotation marks. LOL, you gotta wonder how guys like that ever managed to win Nobel and Pulitzer Prizes without someone like you to give them such great stepping stones for improvement! Thank you again!
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Date: 2011-03-29 02:18 am (UTC)