Awesome awesome awesome! I'm very intrigued by this beginning. I like how you've made the demon and his handiwork so very very evil. I've always hated it when the bad guys do little more than smirk and talk sarcastically, and your evil characters definitely do more than that! Love especially the description of the smells. *shivers* I'm so looking forward to reading more! Write quickly, my dear!
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Date: 2010-07-26 04:02 pm (UTC)