some people when they write about stuff that's just, well, gross you feel like they're just trying to be edgy or gritty
I was nervous about this scene because exactly what I DIDN'T want was for it to sound like I was just trying to be edgy. It's like when you see someone label their story as "darkfic," you just know it's going to be a lot of gratuitous abuse, sexual or otherwise. So I'm really glad this worked for you!
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Date: 2010-07-29 02:04 am (UTC)I was nervous about this scene because exactly what I DIDN'T want was for it to sound like I was just trying to be edgy. It's like when you see someone label their story as "darkfic," you just know it's going to be a lot of gratuitous abuse, sexual or otherwise. So I'm really glad this worked for you!