I found this story a while ago; I don’t even remember why I didn’t comment then, maybe it´s just that it was too deeply, disturbing? for my fiction standards I didn’t come out with anything decent to write.
You’ve built up such a stunning, complex, creepy and horrifying reality I find myself short of words to describe it, all of it with a mesmerizing writing that made me hold my breath all along. The way you’ve depicted Cas’ love and devotion towards Dean makes me ache, as well as Dean’s towards Sam.
I liked the representation of hell you've developed in this chapter, it was palpable, not only a distant place of eternal pain, but also a city plagued with the taint of human’s darkness and misery.
Sin herself choosing Mary as her name was, I don’t know… interesting.
I felt terribly bad for Dean here, the poor man has the weight of a whole agonizing world on his shoulders, how can he not break?
I have no clue how this will end for them, I mean everything is over, they can trap Lucifer and save Sam, but does it really matter anymore? The devil already won, what’s left? Denying him his whim of wearing Dean in front of Michael? If this is God’s big plan the guy is heartless.
Thank you very much for sharing this gorgeous work, I’ll be waiting for the final chapter.
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Date: 2011-01-29 09:04 pm (UTC)You’ve built up such a stunning, complex, creepy and horrifying reality I find myself short of words to describe it, all of it with a mesmerizing writing that made me hold my breath all along. The way you’ve depicted Cas’ love and devotion towards Dean makes me ache, as well as Dean’s towards Sam.
I liked the representation of hell you've developed in this chapter, it was palpable, not only a distant place of eternal pain, but also a city plagued with the taint of human’s darkness and misery.
Sin herself choosing Mary as her name was, I don’t know… interesting.
I felt terribly bad for Dean here, the poor man has the weight of a whole agonizing world on his shoulders, how can he not break?
I have no clue how this will end for them, I mean everything is over, they can trap Lucifer and save Sam, but does it really matter anymore? The devil already won, what’s left? Denying him his whim of wearing Dean in front of Michael? If this is God’s big plan the guy is heartless.
Thank you very much for sharing this gorgeous work, I’ll be waiting for the final chapter.